remember that it comes down
to this: shaping prose
by turns of thought
to this: shaping prose
by turns of thought
and patience (better—courage)
to not turn too often
or too quick
pausing at a voice, a noun:
acts of knowing, discerning
figure from ground.
I want to print this and look at it every day. So well done, Sthira. Pithy, brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThis is why I love literature majors - for their love of close reading :)
ReplyDeleteHow lovely to have you back Sthira! And ditto to all the above.
ReplyDeleteWhat a stunning poem, truly :)
ReplyDelete"Shaping prose by turns of thought - pausing - figure from ground". So much conveyed in 9 lines. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you all! Excited to be back and to read your poems :)
ReplyDeleteso precise and such a poetic description indeed
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