In his boyhood, my uncle used to draw in curves.
Unfurled orange petals coiled like burning paper.
Leaves looped into and around each other in
an emerald embrace. Paisleys swirled into a
swan's wavy wings and swept a canvas whole.
Years later, he walked on tarred roads for
miles on end. Colour had left him for good
and he'd forsaken the canvas to process new
curves. A twisting spine had bent his neck
permanently, its spring broken, like his fate.
In late life, even words walked out on him.
Of his once-cursive handwriting, no more
than curved scratches remained. The blue
of his hand stained the white paper like
dead veins squiggling for one final breath.
My uncle could never perfect the straight line.
so heartbreaking and tender. You might want to rethink the first line of the second stanza in light of the final line of the poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anannya, and revised. I felt something was off with that line in the second stanza; thanks for catching that.
DeleteWorks perfectly now!
DeleteThis is a heartbreaking picture. And yet, gentle.
ReplyDeleteThis was hard to write, Geethanjali. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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