You inspire deep inbreath
that I express in breathing out
Not out of breath in death
But finding life in moving about.
Grease is necessary for the joints
The cutting of grooves for tires
Movement needs what oil anoints
but without friction there aren’t fires.
Staging a comeback for being gone
Seems to be the right thing to want
The first hurrah is the day’s dawn
That the afternoon will not taunt.
Rev the engine, pull the lever
This last call is for now or never.
An automotive allegory! Gorgeous, Anannya, and the rhyming works so well.
ReplyDeleteWow! Love the rhyme and rhythm of this.
ReplyDeleteWow! The rhythm is lovely.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading this... so well structured too
ReplyDeleteHave steered clear of sonnets for I don't know what reason.. this may make me revisit that unconscious resolve :-)