a-poem-a-day challenge for the month of April
a gentle sea breeze
washes over the garden
stirring the old neem
as if the stars are visiting
flowers now speckle
the little puppy’s grave
Oh what a beauty this poem.. Thank you Geethanjaliit's a painting and a photo
Thank you, Charu.
Such arresting poignancy in the final three lines, and such a beautiful poem overall, Geethanjali.
Thanks, Bhaswati. My old garden had a neem and a mango tree and the flowers looked like little stars.
Oh what a beauty this poem.. Thank you Geethanjali
ReplyDeleteit's a painting and a photo
Thank you, Charu.
DeleteSuch arresting poignancy in the final three lines, and such a beautiful poem overall, Geethanjali.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bhaswati. My old garden had a neem and a mango tree and the flowers looked like little stars.
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