Sunday, April 6, 2025

Anustubh

Valmiki cursed when the hunter

killed the poor bird, a sarus crane

leaving its mate distraught. They mate

for life. And poetry was born


His angry words made anustubh

Is that how it's done, the meter

finds the words to fit? The verses

flowed, 24,000


If it worked for him, will it work 

for me? This poem is the test.

1 comment:

  1. Such a clever, intelligently crafted poem. And it does work!

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